a haiku soliloquy; grandma

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haiku’s in the air
feel it dancing around me
but can’t grab the words!

seventeen syllables
we were taught in grade school
is a good haiku

the 5-7-5 rule
in the Western world’s not
quite right – nor am I!

just a few lines
catching a glimpse of nature
is the real point

grandma — all the relatives gone
in her easy chair
snoring
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alley cat

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beneath the bushes
dashing shadow to shadow
the alley cat hides
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beneath the bushes
slinking shadow to shadow
the alley cat hunts
OR as a “silence” haiku
silence —
beneath the bushes
shadow to shadow
the alley cat slinks
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AND as a tanka
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11 a.m.
out the kitchen window — caught!
beneath the bushes
dashing shadow to shadow
the scruffy alley cat slinks
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