Two versions below; the first from A Haiku Book for Mom, the second revised now:
the faintest light —
fog stands silently
permeates
the morning air
v2
the faintest light —
fog stands silently
filling
the morning air
.
Two versions below; the first from A Haiku Book for Mom, the second revised now:
the faintest light —
fog stands silently
permeates
the morning air
v2
the faintest light —
fog stands silently
filling
the morning air
.