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the faintest light

Posted on 11/17/2023 by haiku djean

Two versions below; the first from A Haiku Book for Mom, the second revised now:

the faintest light —
fog stands silently
permeates
the morning air

v2

the faintest light —
fog stands silently
filling
the morning air

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